overlapping action: UPDATED NOV 9

I just turned in my final overlapping action to my mentor yesterday.  I got tons of fixes to make, which is good; Im glad to have a pro tell me where my assignments can be better.  Heres what I turned in...

Here is my rough rough blocking for this weeks assignment.  Just starting to get the timing laid down to get a better idea.  I will update this tomorrow or the next day.  

Here is a pose that Im working on that is supposed to express Devastation.